Ok spelling Nazis it's edited.
....But I ain't doing the grammer! enough is enough!
Then you have to accept that people will not read it, and that if they attempt to read it, that they may have no idea at all what idea you are trying to convey.
Thats what happened to me, I tried reading it but it is written so poorly that even I, a high school dropout with delusions of intelligent grandeur, can't make sense of it.