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Critique my site...again (groan)
« on: February 10, 2008, 07:39:23 PM »
I've recently added an online store section to my site. If anyone has the time to take a look and comment on it, I'd sure appreciate it.

Specificially, I'm looking for comments from folks who have shopped online frequently. Are things clear enough? Is the navigation through the site good? Page load times? You get the idea.

The online store is here.

Thanks for any replies.

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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2008, 02:46:18 AM »
I shop online for practically everything except gas & groceries. cheesy
Your online store is good. The pages load quickly and the information is thorough.
I even found a gun shop on your site within a 100 mile radius of me that I haven't patronized yet.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2008, 02:51:18 AM »
I browsed for a few minutes. Seems ok, very fast which I like a lot. I'll take one of everything please...  grin
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2008, 03:04:28 AM »
I seem to be getting an extra yard of webpage with no content below the CYA paragraph on each page...  sad Running IE 7, FWIW.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2008, 04:49:17 AM »
It seems to me you are competing with the very people you are supposed to be advertising by directly selling products they also probably sell. other than that, its not bad.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2008, 05:08:52 AM »
Just a technical comment, I'm also getting a bunch of dead space. Running Firefox 2.X.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #6 on: February 11, 2008, 06:45:06 AM »
Sssiiiggghhh. My work blocks your website! angry Maybe when I get home I can check it out. Although after 35 days straight  working 10-12 hours a day i usuallly just fall asleep when I hit the door.  smiley

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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2008, 07:16:04 AM »
Mucho dead space - color black with maroon in the left window.

Using IE 6.0.29 at work with SP2 installed.

As another poster stated you're selling stuff in direct competition with your advertisers. That's generally considered a no-no.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #8 on: February 11, 2008, 08:18:53 AM »
Nice layout, how do you add gunshops??  I looked at the ohio one and I can name off a couple dozen I frequent that aren't on there.

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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #9 on: February 11, 2008, 08:53:23 AM »
Leg, you need a "business to business" section...

i.e., someone who specializes in trigger work can market to the rest of the world, whatever...
 
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #10 on: February 11, 2008, 09:11:17 AM »
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #11 on: February 11, 2008, 09:22:47 AM »
Mucho dead space - color black with maroon in the left window.

Using IE 6.0.29 at work with SP2 installed.

As another poster stated you're selling stuff in direct competition with your advertisers. That's generally considered a no-no.

Yeah, what he said. With the dark colors on the left, the eye is naturally drown to the more prominent part (the center) instead of being drawn to the "Gunshopfinder" part of Gunshopfinder.com.

In addition, how about some sort of search function for the finder portion? Maybe where you can input your zip code or city name and it returns the gun shops in your area.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #12 on: February 11, 2008, 09:26:27 AM »
center the whole mess too - those of us with larger screens get a LOT of white space at the right side...
 
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #13 on: February 11, 2008, 11:00:29 AM »
Internet Exploder here.

The page is about a mile long with the center black and left-hand rust colored columns extending all the way down, blank as can be.

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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #14 on: February 11, 2008, 12:24:21 PM »
I would recommend going to a CSS layout instead of using tables. That would help with your whitespace and clean your markup a lot.
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Re: Critique my site...again (groan)
« Reply #15 on: February 11, 2008, 01:17:20 PM »
Thanks for the replies. People commented a few years ago about all of the blank space below the copyright and disclaimer statements. The black box below all of the text has to "float," depending upon how much text is on a particular page. It's a problem I've been meaning to address, but I haven't yet found a good solution, other than redoing the design of the site.

As for allowing searches by zip code, that's an expensive proposition. And, given that I don't have thousands of shops on the site, it would be an expensive proposition that would give searchers shops that are a very long distance from their location.

I started out cold-calling shops on the site, which was not the best way to add them. Now I have shops contacting me to be on the site. Some are little hole in the wall shops, others are medium to large shops. I manage to retain about 70% of the shops on paid renewals, but lately I've been getting a lot of store owners retiring or dying.

I gave a lot of thought to adding items for sale that the shops carry. I'm now getting anywhere from 14,000 to 17,000 visitors a day, the shops are getting 1,000 to 2,000 or more people a month viewing their ads, and I'm only charging them $100 a year for the ads. They're paying much less than a penny per view, a price they can't get anywhere else. (I'm paying 25 to 50 cents per click with Google for AdWords ads for the products on the site).

So, to cover increasing hosting costs and to make the site a truly profitable venture after four years of work, I decided to add items for sale. As I see it (or justify it, if you view it that way), people are either going to order something online, or they're going to want to see and handle a product. The latter group won't buy from my site, and the former group will be more inclined to go online rather than to a shop.