Thanks you guys for your help! i thought i'd show you what you helped me write as a thanks. firstly, here's the bit where i used to have the broken brake line, but changed it to the coolant hose. the situation here is three new people arrive[JIM, KRISTI, and ALEX] to help the original group, right after the shootout.
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JIM
Looks like you needed some help! You guys alright?
PHIL
Yea. Don't know about the truck though.
JIM places his rifle in the truck bed and hops down. He has a pistol on his waist. He starts walking toward PHIL.
JIM
Well, if the truck -
PHIL raises his 1911 and aims it at JIM.
PHIL
Remember, I don't trust you yet.
JIM backs away, hands slightly up.
JIM
I just wanted to see if your truck was repairable! I just want to help...
PHIL nods and lowers his pistol.
PHIL
Just go slow. All the damage is on the other side.
PHIL motions and walks over, JIM following. FRANK, GRAHAM, and LOUIE follow. KRISTI jumps out and follows at a distance, as does ALEX. JIM inspects the bullet holes, most of which are on the upper part of the truck bed. JIM points to the ground near the front of the truck. There is a liquid of some sort on the ground.
JIM
Look! Something is leaking on the ground.
ALEX steps forward and inspects the fluid. He then gets up, saying:
ALEX
Could you pop the hood? I bet it's a coolant leak.
PHIL nods in agreement and goes into the truck, and pops the hood. ALEX messes around inside the engine for a little bit.
ALEX
Yup, a coolant hose was torn up by a bullet. I can fix it for you guys if you want.
PHIL begins to warm up to the new trio.
PHIL
Really? Could you?
ALEX nods.
ALEX
Just need a few tools that are in my truck, and maybe half an hour.
After a moment, PHIL smiles. He extends his hand, and says,
PHIL
My name's Phil.
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At this point, ALEX comes out from under the hood with an empty coolant bottle in his hands and says:
ALEX
Got it! I fixed it with a piece of tubing and some band clamps. The store here had coolant that I poured in to replace what was lost.
PHIL
Excellent! Alex, I really appreciate it.
ALEX
I'm glad I could help!
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Next part is where the tran-pan breaks.
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INT. PHIL'S TRUCK DAY
GRAHAM
Hey, look. [pointing] looks like there's a live zombie on the road up a ways.
PHIL
Betcha I can run right over his head!
GRAHAM
You're on! I'll watch through the mirror.
PHIL drives, aiming at the zombie, and GRAHAM looks out the right side mirror. They hit the zombie with a jolt, and just as they begin to laugh, there is a extremely loud metallic crash, and the rear of the truck temporarily looses traction, fishtailing on the road. We can now see from the rear view mirror the crushed zombie, a two pieces of metal with will turn out to be the transmission pan, and a big puddle of reddish fluid. Cursing, PHIL maneuvers the truck to the side of the road and hits the brakes, then kills the engine. They get out as ALEX drives up in his truck and his two companions exit the truck with him.
EXT. HIGHWAY - DAY
ALEX
I saw you spin out! What happened?
PHIL
I don't know! I ran over the zombie and there was this clatter, and I started spinning!
ALEX
Well, let's go over and see what happened.
The camera is now stationed at the area of failure, and everyone is jogging up to the area. ALEX comes up to the puddle, touches the fluid, rubs it between his fingers, and smells it. He then sees the transmission pan, lying broken, on the ground. He walks up to it, and picks it up.
ALEX
Oh, nuts... You know what this is?
ALEX holds up the two broken pieces, and everyone shrugs.
ALEX
You just broke the piece that holds your transmission fluid inside your truck. The reason you skidded is probably because the wheel slipped on the oil. Now, I'd say, you're pretty much screwed. Is your truck a stick shift?
PHIL
Yea...
ALEX
Well, in that case, I'd bet you've got a few more miles until your tranny shreds itself to pieces and seizes up, since it's got no more fluid.
ALEX throws the pieces to the ground and shakes his head sadly. The rest of the group looks anxious, nervous, etc.
PHIL
Well, you said we've got a few more miles. I'd say let's go until the truck doesn't go any further, then we can switch my trailer to your truck and keep going.
ALEX
Alright. Let's get moving.
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Thanks again,
~tmm